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Rising Sun ch. 7+8

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7. It's Now or Never.

In the blink of an eye, I had Jake cradled in my arms as I raced to my grandparent's house.

"CARLISLE!"

"Nessie?"

"Please! He need's help I-I don't know what to do!"

"Please relax, Ness. It's going to be fine."

As much as I didn't want to leave Jake, I didn't want to eat him either. Carlisle must have sensed something and handed me a medical mask.

"It helps."

Good enough for me. I grabbed Jake's hand. I could feel his pulse fading. 'Damn it. FIGHT!' I don't know if he realized it, but I wasn't just talking about his life. I was talking about for me. I wanted him to fight for me like he normally would, but he just gave up and walked out of my life. I won't let him go like that. He means too much to me. I remembered my mother's stories of strong Jacob who never stopped going after her until I came along. Then I began to wonder, 'If he really loves me, why did he give up? He fought for my mom for love, and yet he leaves me here? That's bullshit! Maybe it is just this imprinting thing. It's like it forces love between two people, maybe Jake is really still in love with Mom. He seemed so intent on loving her. Maybe Jake didn't feel like he was losing me, like he did my mother. He always had me and fought for me truly, until he left. Why in the world would he just leave, I don't understand it!'

I looked at Jake. The blood was gone. Carlisle was stitching him up, even though he was almost completely healed.

"He'll be out for a while. He lost quite a bit of blood. He might have died with out you there."

"Thank you, Papa." I hugged him.

After he left, I looked to Jake. I kissed him. I had a LOT to think about, but all I could think of right now, was Jake.

8. Goodbye, My Almost Lover.

Jake was completely fine in the morning. I spent the night laying next to him on the couch. I woke up with his arms around me. I turned to face him.

"Why did you leave?" I asked him, starting to cry.

"There's a lot to tell you."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean, I didn't leave you by choice. I don't know how or why, but I felt like I had to leave immediately. But I didn't want to! All those things I said to you, I don't know why I did or even what I was talking about. I fought with every fiber of my being to come back here. I love you . . . "

I leaned up to kiss him, when I heard something behind me.
"Hold that thought." I said, as I turned around.

"Don't let me interrupt." It was him, that damn vampire! Jake growled and was going to get up. 'Wait, Jake!' He glared at me and sat back down.

"I see your will power is strong, considering the fact that it broke through to come back. I assume those memories have started to come back to you by now then."

"Yeah. They are actually." Jake sent my flashes of his memory, of this vampire doing the same thing he did to me. It was the classic power we are supposed to have of controlling people's minds. "You must be the biggest pussy for not wanting to fight me." Jake taunted him, looking for the fight. I don't blame this vampire guy, I wouldn't want to fight Jake either.

That's when they leaped at each other. I was about to jump into the fight when I was pulled away. In the blink of an eye I was outside and in the middle of the woods. I looked over to see Drake.

"Drake what the hell?!" I screamed at him.
"I didn't want you to get hurt . . ."
"I DON'T WANT JAKE TO GET HURT!" I was about to run back to the house and smacked right into him. "No you can't go back!"
"Why the hell not?!"
"Because I would rather save you the pain of seeing your ex-lover's blood and dead body." He smiled deviously.

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Oh man. I am getting really mean with all these cliff hangers :)
Yay new chapter!
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Yes, you are very mean. But I knew it! I! KNEW! IT! I knew that friggin Drake was a bad idea (for Renesmee, not for your writing, 'cause this is great and you know your grammar thank God! Some people don't and it makes me want to scream and pull their hair out, but you're okay! *thumbs up* maybe i'm saying too much........O-o